I was in the shower today and had some thoughts and feelings running around my head and my sister said if she doesn't write those things down they haunt her and drive her crazy. I didn't want that, so I wrote them down and sent them to her for an opinion because not only is she my sister and I value her opinion, she writes poetry among other things and I think she's great at it. Anyway, she liked it and suggested I post it......so here goes and I would appreciate any and all comments, good, bad or indifferent. Thank you.
The Key
I made a key once
a long time ago
one of a kind
unique and special
no other key like it in the world
and there will never be another
I gave this key away
a long time ago
to a person
unique and special
no other person like him in the world
and there will never be another
He took this key away
a long time ago
and tore my soul apart
so I made a new key
and I changed the locks
the key you have
will no longer work
in this, my heart
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3 comments:
I hope that writing the words down does keep them from haunting you. Is it wrong that I hope the haunt him? Very well down, sis!
LOL, not wrong at all. And thank you very much, it means alot to me.
OMG! I so cannot type. I'm glad you understood what I wrote. Ugh. :P
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